Great!

Its so funny! I laughed so hard I woked up my cat! Keep it up. Can't wait for #2!

It's honestly not bad, especially for your first try. I would recommend improving the font as well as the interface.

And then of course with story driven things like this, dialogue could play a huge part; I would work on improving that as well. These are already established characters so you have to make the dialogue fit the character they've already established.

All in all, good first try; keep improving.

Pretty Good

It was pretty good, i would recommend mouse controls for the underwater part of the game if you make a sequel to this. The music was pretty good, got annoying to me after a bit though. And maybe like every few squares you eat restores health?
Anyway, great game 8/10, good job.

TEN!

I loved the game gave me a headache though heh. The music was a little annoying but other then that and some of the puzzles I thought were too easy. Oh and lowrise, approach the spikes by just tapping move forward.

This is in my favorites, nice work, Jay.

I would have said yes.

All of this is pretty well done! I especially like the way you drew the Star Spirits. All of the colors blend pretty nicely too, I don't think I can come up with anything negative to say about it :L.

I like this a lot, especially for it being half done :L. The eyes and mouth in particular are pretty awesome. Nice work.